Found THE Boy - Comments

I really liked this!
Max is always portrayed as a douche and for once he wasn't!
you did an awesome job with this :)

A story where Max Tablot isn't a douche! Great job. I think we're writing for the same competition... This is going to be hard to beat!

Loved it!

Wow.

That word pretty much sums it up for me. This is the first Talbot story that I've been able to read about him being a Flyer without cringing. Thank you, haha.

But really, well done. I liked that the lyrics weren't used, but instead you referenced the song in the title and in her conversation with James. I found a few grammar errors, but nothing to really detract from the story.

I loved that this wasn't a one-shot. It was nicely written and chaptered. You're definitely in the running! Great job!