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    April 29th, 2008 at 10:30pm
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  • bloodravyn

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    loved it
    April 29th, 2008 at 07:48am
  • Call Me Moonlight

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    i have to agree iwth MJLS, just mind all the grammer but the story is amazing
    April 12th, 2008 at 08:37pm
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    Its a good chapter but you really need to mind your spelling, especially in this chapter I noticed a lot of mistakes. Some of them might be just typing mistakes but those can be taken care off by spell check but others are just mistakes that you need to look out for. Mind your capitalization too, don't just go in the middle of the sentence and capitalize one of the words, unless it's a name.
    April 12th, 2008 at 05:36pm
  • Call Me Moonlight

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    i love it still keep going
    April 8th, 2008 at 10:05pm
  • bloodravyn

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    AWESOME!
    April 8th, 2008 at 01:25pm
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    don't make syn shoot himself!
    that would just be... way too depressing

    sometimes you mixed the he and she, like forgetting an s in she, just watch out for that
    April 7th, 2008 at 10:25pm
  • Frankie-

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    PLEASE DONT MAKE IT TEAR THEM APART! PLEASE!
    April 7th, 2008 at 09:36pm
  • bloodravyn

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    u need to use spell check, but otherwise, i like it
    April 6th, 2008 at 11:28am
  • silently.screaming

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    awwh this is so cute *subscribes* your a great writer
    more soon please? xox
    April 6th, 2008 at 11:25am
  • MJLS

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    wow, another Bracky on mibba :D I love these XD yet, I have to say that you'll have to be careful with your spelling and grammar, I noticed a few mistakes so make sure you spell check your chapter before you post it, for example, it's 'against' not 'agents' :D

    otherwise you got something good going on here, I like your storyline, keep up your good work
    April 6th, 2008 at 11:12am
  • ontheedge91

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    awww...poor zacky...he made a mess
    April 5th, 2008 at 08:03pm
  • IAmInfinite0

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    This is cool, so please write more. There's not enough Bracky stories on mibba. :(
    But this one is really good.
    April 5th, 2008 at 02:40am
  • ontheedge91

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    please write more
    April 4th, 2008 at 04:47pm
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