Book of God 1 - Comments

I'm not really sure quite what to make of this, I don't know whether it is about religion, whether it's a story or just a big info/biography, sorry if I come across as harsh, I don't mean to be I just don't understand sorry.

This is the second time comment swap has brought me to one of your stories and I have the same feeling with this one as the last. Honestly, I did not get too much out of this either. It was way to short! There is really not much to say considering the first chapter is more like a short summary. Sorry, I am not that impressed.

Try to make it longer and add more and we'll see.

Kristen :)