Little Love For a Heavy Heart - Comments

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Hi there! I love your plots heree, and I want to suggest you to put the act after what he has spoken behind the quote marks So, like this:

"Brian," I replied with a stupid nod.

Okay? KEEP WRITING!

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Quote marks = easier to follow. Thanks for changing that. :)
The description was just.... Wow. I really felt Brian's loneliness and i could almost be the character because i could clearly imagine what was happening.
They seem so sweet together :D
Can't wait to find out more about their lives.... *much love*

i really like this and like the comment before mine it would be easier if you put the ".." around the talking

I'm intrigued by the start of this story.
Only con-crit i've got is its difficult to follow the dialog, i'd strongly suggest using ".." around spoken text.... it is what it was created for afterall. If you don't, i'll probably still read but i assure you, it'd make the story much easier to follow.
You describe their actions with believable detail so i must say well done for that, a lot of poeple don't quite get that right.
I'm interested to find out what happened to cause the situation you have revealed to us in the prologue. *subscribes*