Wow, this is wonderful. The writing style is simple and clean, but I like it because of that. I also like the first few paragraphs - it really hooked me onto the story. And then it flowed and had a nice and satisfactory ending. It was nice. C:
I'm really happy for Elisa. Her character was nicely developed, even though this is only a one-shot. I don't see that happen often, in a small amount of words. :D
I'm really happy for Elisa. Her character was nicely developed, even though this is only a one-shot. I don't see that happen often, in a small amount of words. :D
It was good.