Like The Sound Of A Smile - Comments

So I just started reading this, and I'm only on chapter four, but you've definitely already caught my attention! I can't wait to read more and find out what history the pair have with one another. Your word choices and phrases are pretty badass too. :)

Wow, shes in a tough situation, not fun at all! But it's good to know that someone cares so much about her.. Jack was his name if I remeber? (I'm usually bad with names) Your story, thought I read more fan-fics then anything, is super hooking, and keeps your interessting, and keeps you wondering what'll happen next!

I enjoyed this greatly. Well done.

Ugh, I still can't imagine the position she is in. I NEVER WANT TO BE THERE EVER. I really like hwo Jack truly does care about her though, so so much. hes such a good guy and so perfect ugh. um ADAM GO THE HELL AWAY WHAT IS GOING ON JUST UM NO STOP STOP STOP STOP. oh my gosh im glad i read this later than usual BECAUSE I NEED AN UPDATE NOW

Who is Adam!?!?

PLEASEE UPDATEEEEEEEE I LOVEEEE THISSS

Ah, the funeral. Poor everyone really, funerals absolutely suck. Gotta love people you don't know telling them how great of a person your brother is, it's bullshit, and I don't blame her for not wanting to go. I'm curious as to why Ellie ran away - like the whole, true reason. But I do have a lot of respect for emmett for going behind family in order to help his sister. Please update soon :D!

The layout is really relaxing which is also reflected in the story, it's described really well and it just flows. I like the chemistry between Jack and Ellie, it's sweet and adorable. I can't wait for an update, and I'm totally going to subscribe :D

Keep writing and good luck

I really, really like this story; and am defeninitely subscribed :).

I could never imagine losing my brother, I always complain about him, but actually losing him would tear me up, so I can only imagine how terrible Ellie feels. I really like how Jack/Ellie as well as the rest of the guys got back to being with Lee. It was very realistic and even though I shouldn't say this, I think she was funny drunk haha. I'm really excited to see what EXACTLY the past was with Jack/Lee instead of her just uping and leaving, like before that. Very good story :D!

I really really really really love this

Awwww protective Jack. and Drake is kind of a douche. I'm already getting that vibe. Thank you for the update, even if you are tired :)

Ummmm ANOTHER CHAPTER?! That's nice and I really like the bits of background on Jack and Ellie's relationship. :) and I'm the favorite. It's my hipster powerzz. Hah

Jack is adorable. There's literally no other way to put it. :) I like this so far. It's great.

Came here through the comment swap. Always nice to find decent stories like this one :).

Though this story is clearly still in the early stages, I'm definitely intrigued. I especially like how you give away little hints about the past without giving away what really has been going on. Were they friends? Were they lovers? Intriguing!

The layout looks really good as well. I like how it doesn't have any bells and streamers to it, so to speak, just a clean, simple and sweet layout. The one thing that bothered me about it is the spacing. The fact that there are not white rules between paragraphs makes it hard to read sometimes. But if you can adjust those and add in some white rules in the right places: great job on the story!

I'm really intrigued by the hints of back story between Ellie and Jack, so I subscribed to this. I can't wait to read more from you.

I'm excited to see where this goes!

Beautiful.