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This story is truly one of a kind. Its something that is easy to relate too. It also makes you wonder what's going to happen next after every paragraph. The visual image you get is spot on. You are truly an amazing writer and I hope you continue updating this as soon as possible.

I like this I like this alot\

This is genius. You are so amazing, and I so adore everything you do. I love your description and structure, and the way you write as if you just don't care. It's nice, it's meaningful, and I love it.

Please keep writing this is really good <3

Oh god. Please, write more. Keep going with this. Thank you, comment swap! I love the whole gang thing, I love how it's themed and how she got dragged down into it. Oh, this is awesome. <3

I'm rec-ing and subbing right, right now. Keep it up and carry on! <3

I dont have a clue where this whole story is going but it looked original and I liked it so i'm your subscriber number 3!

also, don't worry about your writing there are so many peolple on mibba that are completely terrible, in a who's-the-most-aweful-writer-contest you'd lose epically! :)

I think it's really good, I honestly do but if you're feeling really shitty (sorry for my use of language) then you should take a little break and catch up on sleep? I like the layout, the summary (both summaries), I think you're a good writer I really do, but if you feel the way you say just take a break and try and remove all stress for a while? (Sorry to get involved.)

I really liked the prologue, it was short sweet and to the point. Though I'm not incredibly sure what that point is. This proves to be very mysterious and interesting all at the same time. Who's teaching her these things? Why? So many questions! You've definitely dragged me in and I'm so curious it's unbelievable. The title also really draws me into what's bound to come. It's very nice and different, unique and eye catching.

I loved nearly everything about this. I do hope that you update this soon, darling, because it's lovely.