Making Wishes On Dying Stars. - Comments

Ok I am totally and extremely confused right now so that's good :P the only thing I have to say is you know how theirs over acting, well theirs also over writing (in a way) so just be careful not to over exaggerate things like when she went to go across the room to get the paper I had to go back a few times to reread it because it was so drawn out I got confused as to what just happened and one thing I noticed was paper doesn't groan, it crinkles or something. But yeah I'm really intrigued right now haha I did not expect that Im kinda excited to see what you have in store for us :D

Ok I am totally and extremely confused right now so that's good :P the only thing I have to say is you know how theirs over acting, well theirs also over writing (in a way) so just be careful not to over exaggerate things like when she went to go across the room to get the paper I had to go back a few times to reread it because it was so drawn out I got confused as to what just happened and one thing I noticed was paper doesn't groan, it crinkles or something. But yeah I'm really intrigued right now haha I did not expect that Im kinda excited to see what you have in store for us :D

Preggers and thinks someone who sounds a lot like Zacky is good looking, huh? I can deal with that :) Zacky's a cutie!
Liked the update dear!
Cannot wait for more!

Damn! I love the idea/concept for this story. I'm so glad comment swap brought me here. I have to say that the possibility someone from Avenged Sevenfold being a daddy at a possibly young age is pretty scary, yet I want to read that unfold! Please, please update soon, I want to know more about this plot line/happenings!