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  • killerlithium

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    this seems like a very good story hoping to read more soon
    July 11th, 2012 at 01:02am
  • Stacimom

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    To answer your question of which point of view you want to continue in you should put a mix a both Frank and Gerards pov. It gives the reader an inside look on whats going on in their heads. 3rd pov is also good too. I have high expectations for this story. Its really good and not your typical Dom/Fertile fanfic. Keep Writing!!! Mr. Green
    July 11th, 2012 at 12:30am
  • conventionalweapons

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    Gerard is really sweet c: i like it a lot! :D keep writing!
    July 10th, 2012 at 11:42pm
  • pplz123456789pplz

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    Write more...Pwease :D
    July 10th, 2012 at 10:00pm
  • we all fall.

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    This is cute c: And relatively different from others just in the style of which you write c: I really like this! Update soon yeah?
    July 10th, 2012 at 09:17pm
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