Holes 2 - Comments

@ SabinaTanzola
yay!!

@ mrs.stiglitz4207
I have a new computer now. now it's just about getting word on the computer.

@ SabinaTanzola
oh yay!!!! i am soo happy!!! yu just made me sooo happy!!!

@ mrs.stiglitz4207
I hope I can respond like this? Lol. Anyways, I haven't been able to update because I am computerless at the moment except my mom's computer which is occupied a lot of the time. XD I should be getting a new computer soon though.

I'm here from comment swap and omg i abso-freaking-lutely love this story!!!! i've alway wanted to write a holes fanfic with a girl in the picture but this is way better than anything I could've written! I really hope there's an update pending and that this isn't a dead story because I am already head over heels in love with Squid and the story;) keep up the good work!

I'm here from comment swap and omg i abso-freaking-lutely love this story!!!! i've alway wanted to write a holes fanfic with a girl in the picture but this is way better than anything I could've written! I really hope there's an update pending and that this isn't a dead story because I am already head over heels in love with Squid and the story;) keep up the good work!

I'm here from comment swap and omg i abso-freaking-lutely love this story!!!! i've alway wanted to write a holes fanfic with a girl in the picture but this is way better than anything I could've written! I really hope there's an update pending and that this isn't a dead story because I am already head over heels in love with Squid and the story;) keep up the good work!

I'm here from comment swap ^-^This is an amazing story, and you're writing skills are really good. Also this story it very well written. Love this story. I really didn't like the original "Holes" but i love this sequel. Please keep writing and i hope to see an original story soon. Keep up the writing XD

I'm here from comment swap ^-^This is an amazing story, and you're writing skills are really good. Also this story it very well written. Love this story.

This story may be really well written but I just don't get why you'd write a sequel to "Holes" - it's find as a stand alone book...

But yes, I'm coming from comment swap so...

I love your writing skills, I think that you're absolutely brilliant but if you came up with your own, original idea that I would most likely read your story.

Im here from comment swap, and I have to say that I was pleasantly surprised by this story. I was forced to read Holes at school for 6th grade English, and I hated it, and as much as I dont like the original Holes, I actually quite enjoyed this story. I like the fact that I can really relate to Cat and the way she is treated by the boys purely from my own life experiences. Keep up the good work!

I'm here from comment swap :)
So this is actually a really unique story.The first of it's kind,well that I've seen.I liked Holes the movie.Tehehe.I like the thought of a rich girl going to dig holes with a bunch of boys.Because you probably won't ever see that in other stories.But yeah,keep writing

I'll be honest, when I saw this was a "sequel" to Holes, I was thinking "Uhh... Right. That was fine by itself." because I LOVE Holes. You definitely proved me wrong! You've captured the characters really well and keep the readers attention! Definitely continue writing! :)

Really well written! I love how well I can see everything but you don't get all wordy and lengthy with descriptions! The dialogue is really natural and witty! Update soon pleaseee

I LOVE LOVE LOVE this idea, its so unique and you could go absolutely amazing places with this. I like hwo you also focused on character as well, and not just the plot as I've done way too many times. You're a great writer, and you think of the piece as a whole instead of individual parts coming together. I also really like how well the characters interacted, they were really close and seems like a normal group of friends. and i feel bad for the rest of the friends who had to witness that Gordie/Cat moment, I would scream and freak out and hit them or SOMETHING haha. You have a great story going, the only thing I would change is get some type of different layout going on, anything original is better than the basic one mibba gives us :_.

Found this through comment swap. I really enjoyed reading this. Hardly any mistakes. You had good grammar. I can't wait to see what happens with this story. I will recommend it and subscribe to it. :) <3

Comment swapper!!

First let me say I adore Holes and I'm excited for this to really get developed.

Your summary was inviting, but maybe you could spruce up the layout a bit?

You should go through and reread your chapter closely before posting them, just check for small little mistakes like this one
"He shrugged his shoulders. “I guess. You wouldn’t have anywhere to go.” She let her go."

Other than that, I really like this :)