Haha, when I was how short this was I had my doubts about it, but that was really well written and made me believe that they have so much more life outside of this small segment. Some people struggle to build a believable relationship in long chaptered stories and here you've done it in a few hundred words!
I applaud you for writing something so simple and short yet so great!! It's a skill I've never had!
I applaud you for writing something so simple and short yet so great!! It's a skill I've never had!
Jen xx