Smooth Lips & Rough Lies - Comments, page 2

feedmetothewolves; (100)

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I liked it, Mara's indecisiveness gives me whiplash.

August 10th, 2012 at 07:49pm

PhoebenPaige (100)

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Totally a tucked up cliffhanger lil love the story so far def cant wait for more :)

August 9th, 2012 at 01:56pm

True4Love (100)

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Please please please update another chapter.!! It keeps getting better.!

August 8th, 2012 at 03:36am

just.breathe. (100)

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OH BOY!!! It just keeps getting better and better!! Update soon I want to read the next chapter as soon as possible!!! Love this!!!!

August 7th, 2012 at 06:05am

RomansRevenge;; (100)

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Love it

August 2nd, 2012 at 03:27pm

sapphire-eyes (100)

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damn wat a cliffhanger. update soon please its so goodd i need to read more.

August 2nd, 2012 at 10:56am

Justice Rader (100)

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NOOOOOO!!!!! I DONT WANT TO WAIT!!!!! please update soon. :)

August 2nd, 2012 at 07:07am

skinny love. (150)

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That gave me goosebumps, they were so so close to actually kissing WHAT.

Update soon, love!

August 1st, 2012 at 08:33pm

icanread29 (100)

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Gah! Why did you leave me with the suspension!! I can't wait for the next update!!!!!!!!!

August 1st, 2012 at 06:11pm

feedmetothewolves; (100)

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Whaaaaat cliffhanger?! Nooooo!

August 1st, 2012 at 03:24pm

BlackTiger (100)

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I can't wait for the next update! Hope she doesn't move away from him mentally and physically.

August 1st, 2012 at 02:08pm

kelink (100)

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I kinda really hopes she sleeps with him.

August 1st, 2012 at 01:50pm

Shadowsgirl (100)

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so liking this!!!
your such an amazing writer! please update:)

July 29th, 2012 at 11:54am

Justice Rader (100)

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i would have ripped his close off then and there downstairs that is.

July 26th, 2012 at 11:29pm

BubbaBaby69 (100)

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Thank you all for the lovely comments!

July 26th, 2012 at 08:13pm

just.breathe. (100)

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I love this story!!!!!!! Can't wait for more!!! I always look forward to reading and get excited when I see it's been updated!!!!

July 26th, 2012 at 07:34pm

Trig-ger (100)

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its really good

July 26th, 2012 at 07:26pm

icanread29 (100)

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Gah! I loved this chapter! Jacob makes me want to jump his bones too! Haha can't wait for the next chapter! :)

July 26th, 2012 at 06:36pm

BlackTiger (100)

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I like this story so far. I cant wait until it progresses on! I will enjoy it. Please keep writing. Thanks.

July 26th, 2012 at 06:40am

skinny love. (150)

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This is lovely!
Please update soon c:

July 26th, 2012 at 02:50am