Wow, this is uh, wow. I'm just going to rec and subscribe to this so that I know where to come find this later when I have more time to read every chapter. This is really good, I mean really. A lot of writers make sex scenes so very awkward, and yours was far from it, it was actually very nice, realistic even. You gave me enough information to tell me what was going on, but you also left some room for my mind to take over. Very, very good. I don't know what else to say, but wow.
It's kind of cute to see them already turning around in their relationship. I sometimes feel that she wants to but she pushes herself into hating him still. I get so nervous everytime she talks about how her sister is still missing. still loving it. -s