I was wondering when you'd update this story! I've been missing this :3 I'm glad Jessi is better & Dani & Phil are spending more time together.
I so know what you mean when you cant update your stories like you want cause of school. I'm currently burried in homework! I stilltry & make time to read & write but its so difficult at times. Anyways, I'm just saying I totally understand. I swear, my writing is the only thing keeping me sane nowadays.
Hello, I'm from comment swap! I don't really know anything about this band or anything. Maybe I'll check out a few songs now. You're story is very interesting. I do think your story is good, but there are some things I have to point out.
One of them is that in an abusive relationship it's more than just "I love you still" or "I hate you but you draw me back". The victim starts to lose their independence. They don't know how to function alone or without someone telling them what to do or how to behave. The lose their self esteem and don't think that highly of themselves. It's also very hard for the victim to leave the abuser.
Also I found a grammatically errors but their not that big of a deal.
Sorry about that, I don't like comments that are all about correcting my work. I just want you to know that I did like your story.