She's Stuck in Her Daydream - Comments

  • BlueEyedAngel2

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    More more more and.... Hummm MOOOOORRRRREEEEE!!! I think that sufficiently covers it... No.. Not quite... MMMMMMOOOOOOORRRRRRRREEEEEE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!
    Thank you
    September 6th, 2012 at 05:37am
  • Starfeesh

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    I like this alot so far, great job
    August 12th, 2012 at 06:17am
  • littlemisslonely

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    Love it! Especially Louis' entrance. Haha. :) I hope this isn't rude or anything, but I noticed a bunch of spelling/grammar mistakes. Once again, sorry if that's rude, they just bothered me.
    August 12th, 2012 at 03:33am
  • nicolecullen

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    I love your story so much. I'm not the biggest one direction fan but your story is amazing. Please update soon :D
    August 12th, 2012 at 02:56am
  • Caitosaur.

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    I just wanted to say that in the story description you wrote that Vanity was "tolled" which is like.. needing to pay, instead of "told" which is someone telling you something.
    August 12th, 2012 at 02:34am
  • Bugalouie

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    I like the concept! There is a lot of potential here for the story line. Update soon!
    August 3rd, 2012 at 07:41am
  • xXMissGothicGirlXx

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    I like this story. :)
    August 1st, 2012 at 07:30pm
  • pinkgirl1

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    I really like this!
    July 31st, 2012 at 06:59am
  • littlemisslonely

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    I really like this. I especially love Vanity. Haha. :) On another note, I strongly recommend that you spell and grammar check before you post. I've noticed a bunch of mistakes. Sorry if that's rude or anything. Once again, love it, and I hope it's Harry that likes her. I think that would just be great. Haha. :)
    July 31st, 2012 at 05:02am
  • kierstlovesyou

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    Im in love <333
    July 31st, 2012 at 04:01am
  • Dakotasun333

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    I like it so farr. :3
    July 31st, 2012 at 02:45am