Waves - Comments

@ spazz
Sorry, I had and still have a cold. My head is all fuzzy, but thanks for letting me know :D

I thought she told Mel in the last chapter?

Finally she did it!! Update soon

I fucking love it! They're soo adorable together!!!

Awh they're sooo cute together! I really hope Jason gets caught. Maybe her and her dad can put him behind bars too. Update soon(:

I love the character development :) Can't wait for more

I am seriously IN LOVE with this story. But im about to kick Jasons ribs in >< Hahaha. Tistans awesome. just sayin.

I love your story!! Personally i think Tristan is a smartass but he'll be good for her. Damn Jason. Hes a sick bastard. Update soon(:

I love your story!! Personally i think Tristan is a smartass but he'll be good for her. Damn Jason. Hes a sick bastard. Update soon(:

I really like the characters and the plot, plus you're a really good writer :) I can't wait for more

Yesssss. Loving it, keep it coming please! Update asap :D

Loving this story! Please update soon :) its one of my favourites now!

awesome, write more soon^.^
or update soon..
or yeah!
I wonder what Tristan is hiding about Jason xp

Oh my gosh, I'm in love with Jason. He seems so sweet! I can't wait to read more! This story is great, there are a few grammar problems, but other than that I am really enjoying it. I would suggest spell checking before posting, it would fix the simple things :D

this is a really good story so far , I can't wait to see where you'll take it.
Also , I subscribed :]

I'm really enjoying this story, Clary is too cute n.n I have to agree with Sherlock_Holmes though, the Clary/Mel friendship was a bit rushed. There were a quite a few grammatical errors in the earlier chapters, but they didn't effect the story much. Jason is a total cutie, I can't wait for the surfing lesson :D I'd love to learn more about how Clary is coping with her mother's absence and the death of her sister. Some raw, emotional scenes you know? All in all, this is a really great story and I'm excited for the next update!

Wow, I really like this story. So far it's pretty good, and it's set in Florida, where I live, so I also like that too. One thing that bothered me was that Mel and Clary's friendship seemed really rushed. It's like they've been best friends for years, instead of only knowing each other for less than a day, so that seemed a bit strange to me. Other than that, this seems really good and I can't wait to find out what happens next!

In your summary, where you put "threw," it should have been "through." I had to point that out because it's one of the first things a person notices.

Also, Ford should be capitalized because it's a brand. Also, your paragraphs kind of run on and I think they need to be broken up into a few separate paragraphs.

So far, that all seems really negative, but I just had to get my corrections and suggestions up and out of the way first. I really do love your story and want to know more about it. It's really well written and your story idea is interesting. It's tough sometimes to write a genuinely sad story without sounding whiny, and you are doing it really well so far. So fix a couple little issues and then please continue.