Thou Shalt Not Kill - Comments

xXGreyWingsXx (850)

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Ugh! Sick, but very well written. I didn't think I'd find anything other than my story when I typed in Dies Irae.
Ivy xxx

June 21st, 2008 at 04:58pm

Sheepy (115)

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Just...wow. I'm not really one to be all that phased by semi-graphic torture scenes, but that was...

Brutal. Bordering harrowing.

And the way you showed him as so calm, so flippant, even. Not bothering about the crime of death, but of the trouble of having to clean up the decidedly bloody mess. Utterly chilling.

Master Clark, I do believe you have outdone yourself.

June 19th, 2008 at 11:01pm

Robbie Williams (100)

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AMAZING!
I love the description.
You can really feel the emotion in this chapter too :cute:

"Scream. Hack. Scream. Hack. Scream. Hack. Scream." That was scary :shock:

June 19th, 2008 at 08:33pm

NAAA (100)

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Awesome Mel.

May 12th, 2008 at 08:25pm

the major key (100)

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I fucking love it, Mel :cute:

May 4th, 2008 at 09:11pm

Robbie Williams (100)

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Amazing.

"...as the bloood spattered from her head." Nice :XD

Seriously, great description! :cute:

April 24th, 2008 at 09:10pm

The Warden's Wife (100)

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It slightly caught my interest.

April 24th, 2008 at 08:46pm

the major key (100)

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Sorry guise.

Yeh spelt psychopathic wrong :tehe:

April 21st, 2008 at 05:56pm

Robbie Williams (100)

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This is amazing.
I can just tell you guys are going to make an awesome story!
I love it, and I'm so subscribing :arms:

April 16th, 2008 at 06:16pm

NAAA (100)

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OMFG , MEL , YOU FREAKING GENIUS :O

Awesome , dude. Awesome.

April 15th, 2008 at 08:54pm

animrod (100)

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omgno:
ORIGINALITY!

It would not be many hours before someone else would make their way, and witness the execution that had taken place while they were sleeping; the unsafe, the sinners, the chosen and the unknowing.
^ Pure beauty.

This is an amazing start. I loved how you worded things, and the descriptions were flawless.

April 14th, 2008 at 12:25am