We Are the Wasted Youth - Comments

Thanks for telling the truth.

This is without a doubt the greatest thing I have ever read on mibba. It's not soft or emotional for the most part. It's straight forward. It's raw.

It's genius.

I actually really enjoyed this! Is it a one-shot? Because it's probably the best one-shot I've read in awhile.

This was...I am seriously at a loss of words. This was an absolutely fantastic and flawless read.
Thank you so much for writing this. It's so honest and so perfect.

Oh my goodness, this is just perfect. I absolutely adore how you've written this, and it definitely makes you think and wonder about outr generation. Amazing work, you should be proud of yourself (:

Interesting. Very interesting.
I like how you confronted a few things a lot of people would be afraid to talk about. Either because they are one of those people you described, or because they're in some sort of denial about one or more of them.
Great job. This was very... news-flashy. Aha. I'm not really sure how else to describe it. But it was very good and smart to write about; you don't see anything really like this too often. Because it confronts the truth.

I loved this piece. <3 It's so sadly correct about some of the teenagers right now in our lives, and it's ironic how everyone has a life you'd least expect them to have.

I loved this! It was so amazingly honest.

I love how you don't mention any names, it's as if you are trying to keep these peoples identities a secret. Every single one of the things you mentioned are an issue in modern day society, by writing this you are in a way opening peoples eyes. Something which I greatly admire.

The tumblr part made me laugh a bit though because I am that girl. I sit there and reblog for hours as sad as that sounds.

I just want to thank you for writing this, like I said before you are opening peoples eyes.

Oh wow, this was just awesome. Loved reading that. :)

'Welcome to our generation, where the nights are long, the drugs and alcohol are endless, and the future has been thrown away for thoughts of yesterday.' I loved this. I loved the introduction and the title and the picture with the quote. I enjoyed this story so much and klasdjlksjds I think this is one of the best thing's I've ever read <3

This was incredibly well written, and very detailed. It held my attention. I liked it very much, even though it's not something I usually read. I like how you introduced how everyone nowadays is sick and corrupted, even though we all like to pretend that we're angels sent straight from heaven.

I don't care, I really liked it! It actually inspired me to write a story? Do you mind if I use a few of your ideas? I adore this, I've recommended and Subscribed, if this is a one off, it's an amazing one off. I love it.

This sounds like hatred towards people. I don't know.
And you repeated a lot of words in each paragraph. Like when the freak kid in spanish class, you repeated isn't so many times.

Good though, I think.

I enjoyed reading this very much, especially the narrative. The characters or people you brought up have interesting back stories.

I caught one typo though:
What sucks though is she wears too much make-up and it makes cough. - You're missing a word between makes and cough.

That was the only typo I caught throughout the chapter :) This was very well written and I'm definitely going to subscribe and recommend as well :D