I am not a One Direction fan at all, but this story itself was really, really, really good. You write beautifully. The sex was hot ;) lol and I loved what you did with the ending. Most fan fics end with happy endings that are so predictable and yours was the opposite! I loved the unpredictable end, the tragic heartbreak of it, it was so not foreshadowed and that's good writing! Definitely had me tear jerking. Good job!
February 11th, 2015 at 06:10am