I adored this. I read it all in one sitting and it was spectacular.
I really like the idea of writing in the form of a letter. We get to see everything only through the eyes of a narrator and get all of his emotions and it was perfect. The ending made me so sad, but I'm glad he finally got closure.
I'm only on chapter four, but I think this is seriously beautiful. Your character speaking in first person seems kind of conflicted, like something isn't quite right with them; Luce seems lovely. I can't wait to have time to read more!
I really like the idea of writing in the form of a letter. We get to see everything only through the eyes of a narrator and get all of his emotions and it was perfect. The ending made me so sad, but I'm glad he finally got closure.
Ah, his was just so perfect, I loved it.