Seven Years of Letters - Comments

  • losing control.

    losing control. (4250)

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    I adored this. I read it all in one sitting and it was spectacular.

    I really like the idea of writing in the form of a letter. We get to see everything only through the eyes of a narrator and get all of his emotions and it was perfect. The ending made me so sad, but I'm glad he finally got closure.

    Ah, his was just so perfect, I loved it.
    July 23rd, 2015 at 01:10am
  • pocahontas.

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    I'm only on chapter four, but I think this is seriously beautiful. Your character speaking in first person seems kind of conflicted, like something isn't quite right with them; Luce seems lovely. I can't wait to have time to read more!
    July 22nd, 2015 at 03:14am
  • maedrinksblood

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    This is beautiful.
    December 31st, 2012 at 11:27am
  • windchster3000

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    I like this story very mush. :D
    September 16th, 2012 at 02:10am