Snake Scales - Comments

I like where this is going... am interested to see how it goes when her and Tom watch those movies together though.

Excited for more! :)

Welcome back! Sort of lol it's starting off slow but it will progress. Zoraya found out about Tom and I won't lie you are rusty but it comes with writing again and getting into the flow again. :)

Well something is happening now, update soon :)

Decided to read this story and really like what you've written of it so far.

Hope you update sometime soon though!

So you teased is with a "wait until you see the next chapter" and I'm determined to read all of your work and inspire you to keep writing!
I like that Tom is so laid back and that the begging to their relationship is so unorthodox.

@ ThereIsNoThrone
I'm glad you find it good enough to reread :)

I'm just re-reading everything from you

@ punkrockerballerina
Will do. When I remember on Friday I will bug you about it so you can update. haha sounds like a beautiful plan my friend

@ teenagedream91
you better be on my ass about updates, like every friday just like comment and be like bitch you better update, cause that way if I haven't written something I have time to XD

@ punkrockerballerina
I'm not. I'm used to people coming to me with their problems and dumping that all on me. I try not to be cold and nonjudgemental and try to give my point of view or advice. They hardly cry so when they do, I am like what am I supposed to do? XD
I'm excited to read it now :) Better keep up with those every two weeks updates. I got my eyes on you

@ teenagedream91
Eh, I'm use to people crying to me, I seem to be that one friend that people go to. Most of the time I care, but there are times when it's just like 'really? Idgaf bout your problems'
Yep, I know the ending and a part in the middle actually two parts, but seriously it's going to be an interesting write.

@ punkrockerballerina
That is incredibly the most awkward thing is to comfort someone that is crying and they won't stop. I'm a good listener, but I have to be more comfortable with someone crying. I get a little odd when someone is crying and feel uncomfortable. I shouldn't feel at ease when someone is crying, but I never know what to say is my point haha stupid cold is messing with my cognitive skills.
Oh you have it figured out then? That's great!

@ teenagedream91
Yeah, I only had to be there for the ice cream and crying aftermath. Oh yeah ummm shit is all cute now, but just wait for the end, I have this total ringer and you get to see how strong she really is! *strong in the emotional/headstrong sense*

@ punkrockerballerina
haha that's the upside was that she wasn't yours. So much sadder when it's yours and you see that something as sad as that happens to your snake. Lmfao, exactly! It can go whatever direction you want, but I get the feeling that Zoraya isn't the type of chick that shouldn't be messed with and the characters you come up with are always headstrong or have some badass characteristics.

@ teenagedream91
Yeah, she was a sweet heart (also glad she wasn't my snake XD). Haha pretty much it goes from where he is now, to keel bitch and suck me....yeah....>.>....

@ punkrockerballerina
Oh I see. What could you have done? She thought she can handle it and sad to say that she couldn't. Do you go too far with his dark side? There is a fine line between him and just a crazy person, but it is a story and if you wanted to make him violent or something like that you can always do so. Hell you can make him a womanizer or somethin', like he's really good at luring girls in with his charm.

@ teenagedream91
Yeah she ate it sideways and her throat was still too small to eat it that way. Every time I try and make Tom darker than he is it just doesn't work the way I want it too! I know, I think I only gravitate towards Tom because of his Loki side, he's so good at being evil I know it's in him, it's just buried hella freaking deep.

@ punkrockerballerina
Awww she does sound adorable. Did she choke on it or something? *sighs* are snakes always like that? I don't know why I find it amusing, but sad at the same time. I do know how you feel about that, you want something who is rough around the edges and he seems so clean cut. You can always make him a little darker if you wanted, it is your story. Let him have some flaws of his own and go on from there. It's funny how you don't favor nice men yet you are graviated towards him hehe

@ teenagedream91
A baby tree boa, she was adorable...and then the next week she died cause she ate her food like a complete retard. -.- Haha Tom is just giving me trouble, I think, because he's so damn nice!!! You know how I feel about that XD

I like writing about Loki more

It's because of the whimsy that comes with writing about a magical creature