Snake Scales - Comments

@ punkrockerballerina
I have no idea! I swear that I subbed and recced but I guess I didn't?
haha well that can give you inspiration. What kind of snake was it?
Writing about real people can be a challenge at times and I find Tom the easiest to write about for some reason. He can go so many ways that it makes it believable regardless of what you are writing about. Once those kinks are loosened then it will be smooth sailing from here. Hope you can figure it out.

@ teenagedream91
Haha loser how did you not!!!
I know! I love snakes so much! *funny side note: I was playing with a snake when writing this chapter XD*
I know, I'm hoping to update this story more and more, just working out some plot kinks....that are a complete pain in my ass! Why is it so much harder to write about a real person than a fictional one? Honestly, Loki gives me no trouble, Tom on the other hand is a pain in my god damn ass!!!! agh!

@ JustThinking
Haha being a story tease is just so damn fun!!!!

I thought I subbed and recced on this story. Guess not. Well I did now :) I agree with Zoraya snakes are so much more friendlier and can be human friendly while spiders are just ew. I don't trust them and they are the most disgusting things on the planet. I rather have a snake any day haha plus they are adorable
The only reason why Zoraya was going slow was because of the lack of sleep, once she gets her energy up then BAM! Tom will be eating her dust. Love the chapter :) Finally you updated this story!

...story tease.. you just love being that... sorry.. but a couple of people have done that to me now... oh well... I better learn to deal with better anyways... good chapter

@ ThereIsNoThrone
Thank you for the lovely words dalring, I'm hoping to get back to this story too. I think I'm going to be updating it Saturday, since both Rio and Garden both got an update this last weekend.

Ohhhhhh, this is snake scales, i forgot that i'm suscribed to this too. I saw you mentioned this in your update to the garden of love, so i came to check it out and saw that i was already suscribed to it and was already in love with it. It would be so great if you could get back to this.

Coming soon huh? Oh well. This seems really good. It doesn't seem like something I've read before so it's a nice change of pace. Hmmm... Subscribing!

I love this story! You should update soon.

I love this. Tom is adorable.

Can't read it right now, but i certainly suscribed. I'm lost in the magical world of Harry Potter.

This seems quite promising, keep it up! So, more soon please!

I'm really enjoying this as much as I enjoy your other story. You're a better writer then you're giving yourself credit for :) can't wait to read more :)

This was a good chapter :) We got to know a lot more about Zoraya and that is some resume she got there. Pretty interesting to see that she even went into the Amazon for three years which explains why she didn't know who Tom was. I also liked that you added a bit of flare to it making her have battle scars sort of speak because not all snakes are friendly and usually when I read stories that have animal trainers they are always the 'animal whisperer' and have this natural talent of always getting the animal to do what they want it to do. Can't wait for the next chapter!

yay! just tom, i'm sick of finding awesome storys then they make tom change into loki, or ben from war horse gets in the mix. description says tom, not tom turns into loki or some ugly dude trys to steal the girl. this has a lot of protental. I'm interested to see where you take this.

Amen to that sister. Thank you for making this wonderful story and I love the name Zoraya. She sounds adorable to be honest and the Insanity video xD just makes my body ache thinking about it haha. I love the concept that you have written for this story and pretty basic so Tom stays in the picture and gets to know more about Zoraya himself. I honestly think Tom will die during the first time during an Insanity work out.