Unjust Succession - Comments

Wow, I did not expect to get a story like this. It's so sad though I wish there was a little more emotion in Phoebe's story though I understand she is just retelling the story in a way she doesn't want to be re-living it. It is good though and if it is for a competition, I hope you do well and good luck :)

Wow, I did not expect to get a story like this. It's so sad though I wish there was a little more emotion in Phoebe's story though I understand she is just retelling the story in a way she doesn't want to be re-living it. It is good though and if it is for a competition, I hope you do well and good luck :)