Before the Rebellion - Comments

(Comment Swap) I did enjoy reading the beginning of this story, and I do plan on keeping up with it. However, I'm not sure if I agree with the decision to make so many volunteer as tributes. Some made sense, like Damian wanting to get away from his parents, but for the others it seemed for no reason. The Hunger Games aren't one to take lightly and just volunteer, but I'm sure you know that. But I tell you, it does get one thinking, so if that was your aim, then bravo, it worked. The grammar has few errors, and I and my brain appreciate that, lol. Keep on writing!

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i started this thinking it was going ti be another bad fan fic. for the hunger games, then i started reading it and i actually enjoyed it. and that a lot coming from me, i really dont enjoy fan fic. because they are very poorly written, but this one, i must say, was very good

(comment swap) I was absolutely thrilled to receive a fanfic for The Hunger Games here on comment swap, since most of the stories it sends me to are about people or things that I've never heard of. One thing that I really loved was that you're writing about original characters. I think it's highly effective, in a fanfic, to place original characters in an already existing environment and situation. I really hate when people write fanfic about characters that already exist by the original author's power because then it messes up the intended characterization. So like if you'd written about Katniss and Peeta, I wouldn't be so compelled to read it because they are pre-existing characters; I aready know who they are and if you changed that I would be a wee bit turned off. But since you created your own characters, I'm very excited and I appreciate your legitimacy as an author. Good luck!

Comment swap as well, but as a fan of The Hunger Games, I can say I eagerly await your next update. You created multiple characters and you're going to go through the games with all of them. I do think you should continue and add more chapters. You'll have me there as a loyal reader. Don't forget to comment swap with me. =)

I'll be honest with you, I'm really not a fan of the Hunger Games and maybe if there were more Chapters I would have gotten really in to the fanfiction. I enjoyed reading the different background stories of all the characters and your a really good writer, I just wish there was more to read and it'd be even better if I actually liked The Hunger Games, oh well.

Comment Swap. I like it do far. It's good. I'm a fan of the hunger games too. I watched the movie. I like how there's a twist in it. I mean Damian is going to volunteer. He sound like a cute character. I'll recommend. Keep writing and tell me when you update. Don't forget the comment swap