September 24th, 2012 at 04:04am
This is really beautifully written :) I love this story so much.
I honestly can't think of anything I didn't like about this story. The characters are so familiar in the first paragraph, and I was sucked in immediately.
The ending is really, really well done. Very subtle references to the song, and I love it.
There's not much else I can say. I would wish that it was longer, but hey, not my decision xD So that's really it.
Final results should be up soon :)
Chapter One: Wow, such a strong chapter. The small details of their romance was cute and then the actual parts in the present really showed how much he cared for Taylor. I really liked the ending, it was simply amazing. I lack the words to describe it. I saw one or two mistakes, but other than that, this was perfect.