Feet First - Comments

This story is so sweet! I just read all that you have of it so far, and seriously love it. :') You're a really great writer.
If you ever choose to pick up with it again, I will be here to read. I'm bummed it was never finished. Although I can understand life getting in the way, or perhaps just losing inspiration... if it was just a final chapter wrap up even, that would be cool. I'd hate to see this left permanently unfinished though, you know?
But that's totally up to you of course. Idk if you'll even see this comment. But I wanted to leave one in case you do still occasionally get on here or something. Perhaps it'll inspire you to know someone's still reading. Idk.
But once again, you're a great writer, and I will be here if this is ever continued. :)

I love this

I love this

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SO GODDAMN CUTE!

They are too adorable.

it's been so long that I had to go back and read a few chapters but this was absolutely perfect. I can't wait to read more! :)

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I loved every last bit of it!

-kayt

Finally! That was perfect!
And Olivia becoming okay through that set.
And yes.
Goddamn, thank you!

-kayt

This may just be my favorite chapter!!!
I'm so glad they made up and kissed!!!!
Can't wait for more <3

I didn't get confused. It was perfect length and I still want more. <3

I kinda want him to run to her grab her face and kiss her
I know it's cheesy as fuck what whatever :P
Great chapter
Can't wait for more <3

Whoops. The whole like second half of that chapter switched from first person to third person. Still nice.

Deary me. What is going to happen?
:/
Please, update soon. Please.

-kayt

Oh wait I think I was sent from the comment swap. Shit. Okay so I subscribed and it's perfect. Seriously now I want more! I literally have nothing to criticize

Omg can you update like NOW?!? I'm too excited

Holly shit that was intense I can't believe all that happened
I hope they talk it out...sober
Can't wait for more <3

Aw, Alex. Mah poor bby!
And Olivia.
Dear god.
Why do you do this to me?!?!

-kayt

Ohhh can't wait for drama
And i don't think that was the greatest idea to call annie...
Can't wait for more <3

Wow, that call was intense. This is why I don't use the phone.
I'm so excited for drama!!!!

-kayt

I really liked this. :) can't wait for more.