Butterflies. - Comments

Randomly found this and oh my goodness! First, it's too adorable for words! Second, you're a fabulous writer. Third, *melts* Gosh. I loved this so so much! Very well done :3

Beautiful :)

This was so wonderful! Student/teacher stories are kind of fantastic, and you did such a good job. I don't even know what to say other than that it was so sweet and lovely :')

This was perfect. I think that's all I have to say, because no other word is good enough. Perfect. Perfect. Perfect. :]

Beautiful as always, love :)
I do wish there was a bit more character development, but I loved how Tony had this bad past that bothered him and the drama was just perfect. Chris was the perfect image of a boy with a stunning amount of charm and maturity for a teacher. Shy on the streets, sexy in the sheets. ;)

okay, so, that was a really long one-shot. pretty sure it's the longest one i've ever read.

i expected a little more drama from the fact that it was a teacher-student relationship - like, someone at school almost finding out or whatever, but then again if that happened things would've gotten really complicated... ._.

i'd hoped they hadn't fallen in love at first sight, because i don't believe in such a thing, but to each his own i suppose. i just wish there'd been more character development in terms of personality; more about why they loved each other apart from their appearances... i mean, 'kind, loving and gentle' are all pretty similar/related and general, imo. sure, tony's kind, loving and gentle, but there's tons of other guys who're like that, too. smartness is a turn-on trait for some, i guess, but it doesn't have that much to do with how tony acts? i mean, for instance, if tony was witty when he spoke then it would've made more of a difference. and as for 'beautiful'... in what sense? physically attractive? that'd be pretty superficial if you ask me. or 'beautiful' personality-wise? maybe both? but anyway, if it's personality-wise, then i didn't really get to know what made him 'beautiful' in chris's eyes, you know? there was some good character development though, of course; the most notable example i can think of being the way tony's so strict about age rules. like how he's all, 'i can't fuck you till you're 16 even though that's only a week away and no one would know anyway', and 'you can't watch porn till you're 18'. he's such a teacher at heart. :p

also... where's jason 5 years later? :(

criticism aside, i thought that was cute. very fluffy. :p i especially loved how chris asked tony if he could see the porn movies he'd been in - because the moment tony mentioned that he did porn, that's exactly what i was expecting and waiting for. and the fact that tony chose a teacher-student porn scene - that made me laugh so much! and like Unexpected. said, i think it was interesting how tony was the insecure one instead of chris, because it's usually the other way round. so that was refreshingly different.

they're like, 10-11 years apart, right? i'd just like to say that my parents are 20 years apart and they're happily in love as ever, so tony shouldn't worry so much. :p hahah. :)

all in all, good job on this!

Definitely the longest you've ever had.
When I first read he was 11 I was like oh, God no. I can't read this if it's some pervert with an 11 year old, but then I kept reading and realized he was older and it wasn't as bad. Idk age-gaps are weird for me, y'know? I was most comfortable when he was 16 though.
I liked this anyway. It was very sweet at some parts and cute at others. I liked how Tony was the insecure one because that was, uh... What word am I looking for? It was unique I guess. It's normally the 'girl' who's insecure y'know? It was a pleasant surprise.
Anyway I loved this as always (: