Why Won't You Listen When I'm Calling Out to You? - Comments

Love it, I'm glad tht Alyn's mom and brother approve if her transformation, I can't wait to see the new her, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Love it, like seriously it's soo obvious tht Brian like Allyn and Allyn likes Brian, I'm sure hope tht this makeover will boost her confidence up, anyhoo she is running for Homecoming thts rather interesting and she has to perform for the talent show, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Oooo Allyn and Brian holding hands, a kiss on the cheek, sitin next to each other and huggin mmmm they r gettin quite cozy and I'm loving it, uncle Jimmy is awesome I love uncle Jimmy he can teach u things tht u never knew could be possible, I hope tht Brian and Allyn takes this little crush feet and turn it into something, cant wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Jimmy is so adorable :3 Allyn and Brian though! Can't wait for your next update!

Hell yeah go Allyn, u tell the jackass off woo let go and be free of urself!!!!!! Tht was awesome she can sure throw a punch, anyhoo I'm glad tht she let go and the guys have a point u can still believe in God and still have a good time, Brian u should ask Allyn out like seriously u guys will make a cute couple, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Allyn's finally letting go, wooo! Brian and Allyn should just date like now. They'd make a perfect couple. Update soon please! :3

I loved it :3 What I like most is how you've added in a character that has a completely different way of running her life. You can definitely tell that Allyn has a thing for Brian, and I'm also starting to think that Brian has a thing for Allyn after how close he's gotten to her. Update soon! ^_^

Love it, I think Brian does have a thing for Allyn tho so maybe but she needs to be confident in herself and see tht she is beautiful, cant wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Darla and Zacky would be cue together, anyhoo soooo Johnny way to make lunch awkward thanks a lot but luckily Jimmy is ur friend so he can make awkward silence turn into a funny one, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

I really like this story and I can't wait for the next update! :3

Love this so far! The characters crack me up. They remind me alot of my friends. Lol. I really hope you continue this story! I cant wait to see where things go. :-)

i dont kno y no one has commented yet but this story is fucking awesome...Darla is crazy for Zacky i just hope he feels the same, cant wait to read more update as soon as u can :)