The Real Him - Comments

Oh
My
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Brian
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God this was so intense I teared up. Brian is a fucking ass and a worthless little man, only a coward would get off by ruining the life of another and thats what he's done to Maxine with all the bull he is drilling into her head, she is not pathetic and she doesnt need him, I really hope she finds her strength and stand up to him before its too late. AND I bet that jerk is cheating on her! Who the hell is June?! I wouldnt be surprised if he is he'd done everything else to her so why not cheat. This story takes me on an emotional roller coaster but I absolutely love it! I cant wait for more =D

OMG! This chapter just made me want to cry so bad! Not only does Brian abuses his wife but he also tortures her into submission. I've had my share of getting burned from very hot water but what Brian made Maxine put her hands into scolding hot water just because she didn't listen to him! And who the HELL IS JUNE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Is he cheating on her too??????!!!!! Man Brian is one sadistic asshole! I look forward to the next update!

Well Brian's an asshole and I have afeeling Matt's worse. So, shoot them?!? I'll do it.
I mean I love them, but c'mon you're leaving no choice but to blow your brains out for beating a woman D: .-.
Update this soon!

This is so awesome. Can't wait for the next chapter :)

this is so well written,cant wait for more

Wow so Maxine isn't the only one suffering from an abusive husband. Penelope is trying not to be too loud but it seems that Matt seems to know where she is at. I can't wait for the next update!

very interested to see where this goes

this is amazing!!! please please update soon!

I just.... MORE!!
This is so good! MAT.. Y U HAVE TO BE BAD!?! D:
More soon please!

This story is great. I can't wait to see what happens!

I can already tell your chapter most definitely will not suck lol, this first chapter was amazing, very detailed I could also picture it in my head and Matt scared the hell out of me with what little he spoke lol, I cant wait for more! =)

Wow the first chapter is beautifully written! I feel so sad for Maxine, being abuse by the man she loves to the point she littered with bruises all over her body and scared to even be herself around because of fear of setting him off. I can't wait for the next update!

Looks really good, I'm suscribing although I don't usually suscribe to co-writings. I'm gonna give it a try to this one. Looks great and can't wait for more! :)

oh my god this look amazing

Chills. I have freaking chills all over just with this chapter alone. Its so vivid, like a movie playing in my head, I love that =). I cant wait to see where this goes, I know its going to be epic =)