Hey, this wasn't as bad as you think! I really like it, and I agree on you about wanting a really cute relationship. I adore this song, it is one of my favorites from this band ;) but I also think that your writing is amazing and flawless. The plot is simple and follows the song very well, but I don't care what you say! I enjoy reading your writing okay?
Well I want a man like Andrew, bro! He is such a romantic. Luckily, Emma is able to sneak off away from her house. I would never be able to do that without getting caught. The thing is, I would think Andrew is fucking crazy for making Emma ride with him at three in the morning. That is just crazy, omg I can't stress that enough. But maybe im lazy and I choose rest over love. I don't know.
Anyways, this is a good entry and if you consider this as a bad one, then wow, I worship you for having such high standards for yourself!
Well I want a man like Andrew, bro! He is such a romantic. Luckily, Emma is able to sneak off away from her house. I would never be able to do that without getting caught. The thing is, I would think Andrew is fucking crazy for making Emma ride with him at three in the morning. That is just crazy, omg I can't stress that enough. But maybe im lazy and I choose rest over love. I don't know.
Anyways, this is a good entry and if you consider this as a bad one, then wow, I worship you for having such high standards for yourself!