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  • b3stfriend4lif3

    b3stfriend4lif3 (100)

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    I really like this, you do need to check spellings and your capitals sometimes but otherwise it's awesome :) Ohh and can't believe Mark said he loved her and then had sex with the red head!
    July 4th, 2013 at 08:42pm
  • GiraffeGiraffes

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    I really like this:) keep updating!:D
    July 29th, 2012 at 03:43am
  • Lady.V.

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    The first chapter was pretty good but it was reallu hard reading it with that layout. I forgot I could change it with clicking to custom layout so my eyes hurt now. LOL

    Anyways, you described things and situations well enough and I liked your writing style. I didn't catch any grammatical errors. So well done, keep up the great work. :)"
    July 17th, 2012 at 08:49am
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