Take A Breath, Let the Rest Come Easy - Comments

  • antivist.

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    Hello, I'm here for Comment Swap. Well, as soon as I saw the title I knew one of my favorite bands would be included. Yay for ATL fanfiction. I like the size of the letter and the type you chose, however, I do think you can work on the theme, since the colors are too bright and they crash agaisnt each other. Blue and red it's not a very good combination. The background photo, you can choose another one, or have it cascade around the whole background not just one part, it's looks messy and uneven.

    (Don't take this as negative comments, I'm just trying to be constructive, but all in good intentions, dear)

    The story seems good, it has a good storyline that you can work with. I read a few chapters and you seem to be doing a good job.

    Also, I love Jack, but who doesn't? Bless his crazy little heart.

    Anyways, you have a great story, love the plot and where you're taking this. I will definetly keep an eye open for this story, to see where you take this.

    Good luck, hon.
    June 9th, 2014 at 08:26pm
  • Phenax

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    Wow. I wasn't expecting this. It's a really cute and then sad story. I feel so bad for Grace, yet at the same time, I sort of feel for Alex too. I love All Time Low, so very much, and this story is incredible. I have to say, my first All Time Low story, and it was a good one. :)
    February 4th, 2014 at 09:31am
  • asdfghjkqwerty

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    Sequel please!!
    December 13th, 2012 at 09:45am
  • reinventlove54

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    Hey Guys! I know it's been a little while, but rest assured, I have been in college for about 3 weeks now, and it's been... real crazy... haha but I am starting the sequel- so stay tuned- and things should turn around pretty quickly! Love you all! Share the story :)
    September 11th, 2012 at 03:07am
  • Akuma-May

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    Comment swap brought me to this story and Even though I've only read a few Band Fan-Fics, this is one of my favourites. Theres no spelling or Grammar mistakes that caught my attention and It's very well written. Hope you keep up the good work!
    September 4th, 2012 at 05:49pm
  • FangirlOn

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    UPDATE? :)
    August 27th, 2012 at 06:28am
  • adolescentglory

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    omg this is fantastic I need a sequel
    August 25th, 2012 at 10:39pm
  • forever_hustler

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    AWH AWH AWH the part where she asked what he thought of her only by appearance reminded me of the movie friends with benefits lmao !
    August 16th, 2012 at 12:22am
  • forever_hustler

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    wsdftgyhfjvnmjbm omfg this is adorable !
    August 16th, 2012 at 12:15am
  • forever_hustler

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    soooo cute so far ! i can tell grace & alex are going to get along !
    August 16th, 2012 at 12:08am
  • halfmoonkid

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    This was amazing! The whole story was! There wasn't a chapter of this that I didn't like. :)
    Please post the sequel soon!! Please?!
    Oh and by the way, good luck with College!! :)
    August 11th, 2012 at 05:10pm
  • XxxMariahxxX

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    Sequel!!!! Hurry! OMFG! I agree with Grace, Alex can go to hell!
    August 11th, 2012 at 04:53am
  • FangirlOn

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    UPDATE?
    August 11th, 2012 at 02:28am
  • halfmoonkid

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    This chapter was really good! Please update soon?
    August 5th, 2012 at 11:34pm
  • XxxMariahxxX

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    Alex is a douche! >:( She needs someone like Zack!
    August 5th, 2012 at 08:50pm
  • halfmoonkid

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    Ugh, I hate Alex right now! :P haha
    This story is amazing! Update soon? Please?!
    August 3rd, 2012 at 04:41pm
  • AllyIsDumb

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    Your grammar is perfect okay. The last one I read was like, "ily 2 beb" said the guy in the story. n_n
    August 3rd, 2012 at 12:57pm
  • thepartyscenebrah

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    omg yes please do a sequel!!
    August 3rd, 2012 at 03:58am
  • FangirlOn

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    I really like this story, can you update soon please?
    August 1st, 2012 at 04:11pm
  • FangirlOn

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    I really like this story, can you update soon please?
    August 1st, 2012 at 04:11pm