Looks interesting and like a really good story. I've been reading lots of Ronnie fics lately, can't wait to see how this one goes along :)
July 18th, 2012 at 07:56am
(Comment swap!)
I love Ronnie Radke! This story is in some dire need of a summary and a layout. The summary draws people in and a layout adds to the mood. Think about it. Your writing style makes things a little jumbled. When a new person starts talking, you need to start a new paragraph. And there should be space between each paragaph. Other than that, this was fantastic! It's so unique. I think I might just have to subscribe... ;)
