This is a very emotional story. I am waiting to see what happens at the end. I feel like you should have described the characters more because I don't know what they look like. Yeah I could look at the character list but pictures don't really portray it like words would. :) I enjoy this story though.
DAMN IT!!!! I must know what else happens!!! Now usually I don't beg for another chapter, but I must know. PLEEEEASE post another! Your writing kind of reminds me of Ellen Hopkins for some reason.. I don't really know why but it does. LOVE!