The Princess and the Caterpillar - Comments

interesting story

I really like this story. :) It's so… real. Most likely because it's based on true events, but you two tell it so as the readers can relate. Not just as if it's a fairy tale. Like it could happen (which it obviously did). I wanna know more. :)

this is so adorable! ^-^ i'm in a long distance relationship that started online so i can totally see all of the emotions going on here, and relate to them. i also like that you've given luke (i assume, from the chapter titles) back story that isn't to do with mibba, so it's not like you're just reading about somebody using the internet.

the only thing i could suggest is that you double enter key between paragraphs (and speech, etc). just for readability, it's just general mibba practice. <3

AAw, the way he (you? idk its confusing) describes her is so incredibly sweet it aint even a joke when i say it brought tearst o my eyes. ah, I'm jealous.