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  • Malkin71

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    Pleasee update your story is amazin
    November 1st, 2013 at 02:44pm
  • WhoAtHeart

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    I hope you continue this story. I'm really liking it!
    August 1st, 2013 at 05:39am
  • lroach6

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    love it! update soon!
    April 19th, 2013 at 06:41am
  • sobriquet

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    Yay! So glad to see an update. And the romance is picking up too! Cute chapter. Can't wait for the next one!
    April 15th, 2013 at 12:06pm
  • reindeergames19

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    Loved the new chap! Please update soon!!! Mr. Green
    April 1st, 2013 at 06:01am
  • Bambi Ray

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    please Update it's so great!!!
    March 18th, 2013 at 12:03am
  • Sound of Silence

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    Ah, you left me hanging!! Mr. Green
    January 19th, 2013 at 09:39am
  • leprechaun_katt

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    Okay so the layout could be tons better because it is very grey and plain, not to mention you cannot see the picture. It would attract readers if you put the picture in front and jazzed it up a bit more.

    The summary could have been a little bit longer and descriptive. The first chapter could have been longer and alot more descriptive, it could also use a grammar and spelling check.

    Other than that, I can't wait to see how this progresses.
    January 16th, 2013 at 08:37pm
  • irizarry_muse

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    Okay you caught my attention...i subscribed and recommend. Expect a comment from me eveytime you write a chapter...i like your story a lot...
    August 6th, 2012 at 07:39am
  • sobriquet

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    This story is my liiife. Okay but really I'm completely excited to see where this goes. Nice job!
    August 3rd, 2012 at 07:51pm
  • Lovenature24

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    I LOVE MICHEAL FASSBENDER :D if only I could get his number
    July 17th, 2012 at 03:03pm
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