ahhh this tugged at my heart so much, but in a good way!! this chapter is so damn cute! if he's still with Gena, he needs to end everything with her NOW so that there are no more problems!!
She is pregnant again jeez didn't she learn the first time always wrap ur willy silly jeez but at least Zacky wants to have a baby with her and do right this time around instead of not being able to be a father a second time around anyhoo love this story can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
I think you have a real good set up for a story happening, I have no idea who Zacky Vengeance is, though at this point I kind of wish I did! I think you write emotion well without making it sound like a ramble, it gets the point across without boring the reader because they can visualize and feel with the character. Keep up the good work :)