In a Trance - Comments

mmatasmilie (100)

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Dude he has the hots for daisy ahh

January 3rd, 2014 at 05:11pm

Narneey (100)

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I'm so glad I found a Dylan fanfic!
This is so good and interesting
Please continue!
Thank you!

August 11th, 2013 at 04:05am

slumflower (100)

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the layout just constantly reminds me that dylan has such a pretty little mouth
::inlove;
anywaaaays, I'm really curious as to where this is going and I cannot wait! Oh, Dylan.

August 9th, 2013 at 05:08am

Sina92 (100)

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I like. .. Please continue soon :D

July 2nd, 2013 at 01:34pm

vonhejibergen (100)

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This is really interesting so far, I like how you changed pov's, and Daisy seems really interesting so far.

I recommend you edit it again there are a few misspellings and "They smothered her in kisses and hugs as Nathan and I stood behind and just laughed at her. Daisy blushed as her mom kissed her face multiple times and gushed about how much she missed her as she cried." is written twice just to let you know.

I'm glad to have found a Dylan fanfic, he's adorable and I'm excited to continue reading this.

June 27th, 2013 at 05:35pm