the layout just constantly reminds me that dylan has such a pretty little mouth ::inlove; anywaaaays, I'm really curious as to where this is going and I cannot wait! Oh, Dylan.
This is really interesting so far, I like how you changed pov's, and Daisy seems really interesting so far.
I recommend you edit it again there are a few misspellings and "They smothered her in kisses and hugs as Nathan and I stood behind and just laughed at her. Daisy blushed as her mom kissed her face multiple times and gushed about how much she missed her as she cried." is written twice just to let you know.
I'm glad to have found a Dylan fanfic, he's adorable and I'm excited to continue reading this.