Wake Up Call - Comments

This SHOULD be turned into a story :) I like it a lot (:

This was really hot, not going to lie haha. But, you could also tell the two were in a relationship, and that they admired each other a lot. I think this is a great one shot, and you defenitly could potentially make it into a full story if you'd like :). I really love this story so far! Let me know if you make it into a full one please!

You should really turn this into a full story, you did a nice job on it so far. It would be awesome if you made this a full story!

This should be turned into a story. I'd love to read more of this. I really liked this though. :)

This was great. I'd love to see it become a full story. Good job!

That was both hot and sweet. I could definitely see this being more then just one chapter, they're very cute and I'd love to see the entirety of their relationship. I really liked this, it was well written! Great job!