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  • iplaywow

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    This SHOULD be turned into a story :) I like it a lot (:
    August 1st, 2012 at 02:52pm
  • fascination.

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    This was really hot, not going to lie haha. But, you could also tell the two were in a relationship, and that they admired each other a lot. I think this is a great one shot, and you defenitly could potentially make it into a full story if you'd like :). I really love this story so far! Let me know if you make it into a full one please!
    July 27th, 2012 at 06:13pm
  • Diellza

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    You should really turn this into a full story, you did a nice job on it so far. It would be awesome if you made this a full story!
    July 26th, 2012 at 01:53am
  • han jisung xx

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    This should be turned into a story. I'd love to read more of this. I really liked this though. :)
    July 23rd, 2012 at 07:01am
  • thedopeawesomekid

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    This was great. I'd love to see it become a full story. Good job!
    July 17th, 2012 at 04:38am
  • elle me dit.

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    That was both hot and sweet. I could definitely see this being more then just one chapter, they're very cute and I'd love to see the entirety of their relationship. I really liked this, it was well written! Great job!
    July 17th, 2012 at 03:25am
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