Take Care - Comments

  • Caitosaur.

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    Just kidding. I'm not a huge fan of one-shots.
    But i would like to point out my appreciation for the fact her assistant is named Effie (I'm assuming it's a The Hunger Games reference, just like I'm assuming Astrid's name is possibly a How To Train Your Dragon reference)
    August 22nd, 2012 at 06:06am
  • Caitosaur.

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    Dude. I love this. In the second chapter you missed the i in in the matter at the very end of the chapter, second to last paragraph.
    I'm going to go creep on other stories by you while waiting for an update.
    August 22nd, 2012 at 05:55am
  • ashleygreenethebest

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    I love this story! I think that Louis should be her love interest, or Harry. I don't really mind though, this is such a great idea for a story! Please update soon!
    July 18th, 2012 at 08:27pm
  • Baby-I-like-it97

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    Love the storyline! Update soon.
    July 18th, 2012 at 09:55am
  • sayforeverplease

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    I love this. What caught my eye was the title, because Take Care is my favorite song, ever. But I like, and I hope you update very soon :)
    July 17th, 2012 at 07:28am
  • kierstlovesyou

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    Love it<33
    July 17th, 2012 at 06:34am
  • Minnesota518

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    I AM SO INTRIGUED. I definitely love this so far and can't wait to read more! :))
    July 17th, 2012 at 05:22am