August 22nd, 2012 at 06:06am
Dude. I love this. In the second chapter you missed the i in in the matter at the very end of the chapter, second to last paragraph.
I'm going to go creep on other stories by you while waiting for an update.
But i would like to point out my appreciation for the fact her assistant is named Effie (I'm assuming it's a The Hunger Games reference, just like I'm assuming Astrid's name is possibly a How To Train Your Dragon reference)