Marvelous - Comments

Can't wait for more ^_^

Yeah, comment swap is fucking with me because it re-sent me here. Um, I guess I need to read to comment now, since I can't ramble about how I don't read this type of stories in another comment, right?
Alright, let's read.

Ar. My luck, eh? I never read stories about girl/boy love, and the first chapter is an almost straight sex scene aha.
Although this isn't my thing, I still liked the way you wrote everything and described almost every single detail, which is something I can't bring myself to do properly.. So yeah, good job for the writing anyway :3

Comment swap is SO against me tonight. Sigh.
This far from the type of things that I usually read? I casually only read gay stories, bandslash, and these sorts of things you know? So yeah, I didn't go through your story, and am truly sorry about that. Plus I'm tired, so if it's not the genre of story I like to read, I'm pretty sure I will just fall asleep on my keyboard.. Sorry, really sorry, for not reading it :/
Though, don't let this take you down, because I didn't even judge your story as bad or anything, I'm pretty sure people like it judging the comments below so yeah, still keep it up ! c:

Comment Swap here. The summary is a bit vague... although I'm guessing from the very pretty collage that we have Iron Man to thank for this inspiration? The first chapter was intriguing, a real interesting place to start. Didn't know Stark Industries manufactured condoms, ha! It's well written, descriptive without straying into the realms of 'boring', and it leaves me curious why she has such a grudge against Iron Man.

I agree, it seems ok so far :)

Sounds interesting, good job so far. :)