Flower Crown - Comments

Ooooooo...
I'm really liking where this is going.
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can i get an update please?? i feel like there's a lack of good stories in the subjects that im looking for, and this is one of the few stories that i actually enjoy.

I love the layout. :o

But, dang, I was drawn to this story for some reason. You writing is so good, it's crazy. I like the fact that she has an older sister that she can go to with anything. Kinda like my bro. :) I love how the layout goes with the story. It kind of makes a resemblance to the lead character. Keep it up. I like this. ^.^

Please update this. : ) I love it so much.

pleeeeeease please please update. this story is different. I'm a little confused though about this flower crown? will there be a explanation of it?

I am way excited about this story. I can't wait for more updates!

Love, love, love this! Joe is so sweet and awesome - I'm so excited for updates!

This is such a cute story! I can't wait for more interaction between joe and brielle :)

Hah! She does know who he is! >:D Haha, if I were in Brielle's situation I probably would've freaked out the second I stepped out of the building rather than waiting until I was in the car, so props to Brielle for that. I feel a little sad for her after her mother's call, but it's nice that the happy times picked back up right after that. As for Brielle screenwriting Joseph Gordon-Levitt's movie? Wow and go Brielle!

I love this story I'm subscribing as we speak lol can't wait to see more :)

This was so cute! I love when Joseph and Brielle met and how cutely cliche it was. It was just perfect. I just love Joseph Gordon-Levitt and I can't wait to see more of him and how you portray him as a character!

you're updating this as i type....right??

Love this so much. Sorry, I had to comment again to describe why I like it so much :) I love the fact that it's so relatable… I would totally walk straight into someone. I really hope Brielle and Joe meet up again soon - so cute! Cannot wait for the next update!! Will Brielle and Joe date? Will Brielle get the job? Will she get an apartment? Love the idea of the flower headband too! So original ☺ Pleaseeeee update soon!!! One of the best stories I have read on Mibba… LOVE LOVE LOVE ☺ ☺ ☺

Love this! Please update soon :)

I'm glad Brielle seems to be a shoo-in, as it seems like that may kick-start the happy events in her life. Alas, poor Brielle. Crashing into someone with a coffee tray sounds like something I'd do. At the end, I'm left wondering when Brielle and Joe will meet again, and if it'll be for coffee or perhaps something else? Great job with the update!

This is beyond sweet! I really enjoyed reading this. please update soon? :)

I'm just going to leave this short and sweet, I love this so much. You have no idea. It's very creative and I'm stoked to see where you go with this.

Okay, I love this. I almost never comment on stories, so the fact that I am is a testament to how much I love this story. (there are far too few stories on here about JGL and I'm excited to find one I like so much.)

I love your style; it's very simplistic but gets all of the details across. I also love that Brielle is a screenwriter, it's different than most of the other jobs I've seen mibba story characters have.

I'm already subscribed and I thought I recommended as well, but I apparently did not, so as soon as I'm done typing this I will go recc this. :)

I felt that this was really good until the ending of the first chapter. I understand you wanted to put why the story is called Flower Crown, but I was confused. Has she been wearing the crown the whole time? Did she randomly decide to put it? Did it appear while we weren't watching? That part should be a little clearer to the readers.

Okay, I'm just going to go ahead and say that this is awesome. I feel for Brielle and what she's going through and honestly share her feeling of relief when her sister says that she can stay, if only for a few weeks. The fact that Samantha went through a situation similar to what Brielle is going through and is willing to help speaks volumes about their relationship as sisters. Brielle's job as a screenwriter is interesting and quite different, as is the bit about the flower crown. I'm interested in seeing how and when that space in her crown of flowers is filled.

Rest assured that you will have a loyal reader, as I am subscribing and reccomending this. I look forward to the next chapter.