The Dancing Girl. - Comments

amoraforever (100)

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was hoping i would come back and read more of the story sadly there is no more story to read :(

August 17th, 2013 at 07:16am

amoraforever (100)

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was hoping i would come back and read more of the story sadly there is no more story to read :(

August 17th, 2013 at 07:16am

everdeen (100)

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I love how awkward Garrett is haha keep going girl

April 1st, 2013 at 10:41pm

Kiakara17 (100)

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You ned to udate sooooon this is really interesting and sooo good :D I need more!!!!!!

February 2nd, 2013 at 05:50am

itunnu (100)

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I like the story so sad and cute at the same time, please continue

December 5th, 2012 at 08:58pm

ThayseFerrari (100)

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Update pleaaase! this is so cute!!

September 17th, 2012 at 11:22pm

ThayseFerrari (100)

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Update pleaaase! this is so cute!!

September 17th, 2012 at 11:22pm

dhfadhfa (100)

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Update please pleaaaaase!!

August 26th, 2012 at 02:30am

peaceoflondon (100)

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Update please! I love this story and really need to know what happens next! : )

August 19th, 2012 at 05:39am

jesslittle (100)

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Update update update for reals

August 4th, 2012 at 08:05am

emilyyoumeatsix (100)

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1776 was a fantastic book! Haha and i LOVE this!

August 4th, 2012 at 04:32am

alexandergaskank. (100)

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I just started reading this today and I'm only on chapter 2 and I already love it!

July 30th, 2012 at 10:26pm

pixie dusttt. (100)

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cute <3
Nevaeh really loves her sister. I love them <3
:o foreshadowing!
does this mean that their dad's going to take one of them away? that would be terrible.
I have an idea! not a very good one but still. Okay, so if the dad takes Leslie away then Nevaeh starts to look for her and Garrett helps and then they bod and fall in love and become a perfect couple c:
please update soon! <3333

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July 30th, 2012 at 01:41pm

TatumTSS (100)

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garrett needs to come to the rescue and beat their father up or something lol(:
love this story
update ssoooon!:D

July 30th, 2012 at 06:56am

nothingpersonal10 (100)

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So good! Update soon

July 30th, 2012 at 05:38am

Shadow14 (100)

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I like how Nevaeh was worried when she didn't she Leslie in the house.

July 30th, 2012 at 04:50am

nevershoutnever91 (100)

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I love this story so much! Garrett needs to save them form their father. Can't wait for another update soon :)

July 30th, 2012 at 04:33am

shay online (100)

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I love how they're just lusting for each other. This is coming together perfectly. Please update!

July 29th, 2012 at 03:25pm

pixie dusttt. (100)

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ooo Garrett! ;) having dirty dreams are we?
he called Nevaeh his! that's adorable c:
ahhh, that whole scene when John realized that Garrett had a boner made me smile c: It was entertaining :)
please update soon! <333

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July 27th, 2012 at 02:19pm

solitude115 (100)

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I want more *-* I think you're a really good writer by the way :) <3

July 27th, 2012 at 07:58am