Ahh, it is so refreshing to come across something this flawlessly written... I love this story! I mean, the fact that I have a mini-obsession with Pete Wentz doesn't hurt, but I felt equally attached to Sarah's character. I especially liked your use of fragmented sentences -- my favorite ex., "Lipstick. Note. Gone." -- I think those were really powerful. I also appreciate that you left the ending slightly unresolved to keep me wondering if they could manage the long-distance relationship (in my own mind they do, haha). Anyways, I'm glad I stumbled across this!
August 9th, 2014 at 10:11pm