The Other Payne - Comments

thank you :) xx

So I did that new comment swap thing that they installed on here and admittedly when I found out it was a 1d story I wasn't all too thrilled, but this really is a pretty good story and out of all of the guys I'd say that I prefer Niall. You write really well (:

thank you! I'll fix that up now :)

Love it! Though, a little advice, in your title you clame that is is a Niall Horan love story... that is against the rules. If you don't want to get reported you best take that out. There is this thing called a short summary and that is where you can put that. I'm just trying to help you out. Keep up the good work!

sure :) updating it today

this sound k00l, please comtinue??