10 Ways Gerard Tries to Get Frank's Attention - Comments

Yaaaayyyy!!! :D Wow Im in love with this story
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UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE !! :D

Lets see, weve talk about poptarts, & cockyboys.com. <33

I now love you.

Btw, Just read the shit out of this.

You're totally rocking this man, this is so much better than mine!xo

*headdesk* oh, Gerard. way too early for something like that, dude. >.<

I missed you a lot!! And Ohh My Frerard... Porn in school. I love this story XD
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yes we did!!!!! :D

I really love your story and i think it's pretty cute...i have found myself being addicted to this story so please up date again soon... :) xo~H

I am not normally a Frerard fan but I do love ho cute the interaction is between Gerard and Frank.

Your grammar and spelling is good, but I feel like you may be lacking some detail in your story. As far as like setting a scene and character development. It just seems a little lacking to me, which is disappointing because you have very good writing skills. I would just like you to put those skills to work! Don't be afraid to show off a little! Otherwise great plot/story and keep up the good work!!

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I'm not really in to Frerard fan fictions, but I thought this was rather interesting so I did read the first chapter, your plot is good and you have good writing skills. The whole thing is rather adorable!

Keep writing and good luck

god, this is good! Keep writing :3

Agggh, i love this so much! Update soon! <3

cute ^_^

i am liking this so far...cant wait for more!!

Aw this is cute, your list is very good too!Xo