Wow, this is a crazy cool concept. I like your style in writing, very sophisticated and detailed. If I could change one thing, it would be the layout. It's weird. I know most of it is the normal Mibba layout. But other than that, keep writing, this has GREAT potential.
Wow, this is a crazy cool concept. I like your style in writing, very sophisticated and detailed. If I could change one thing, it would be the layout. It's weird. I know most of it is the normal Mibba layout. But other than that, keep writing, this has GREAT potential.