sworn to secrecy-rikey - Comments

:'D This was awesome!!! :') Updates???

I'm not going to lie, I'm not a fan of Gerard Way and the band he's in. But, I'm sure anyone who adores My Chemical Romance would like this very much. I noticed you have grammical errors and you aren't very detailed with your writing. I'd proof read everything and maybe add a few extra details. But, at the same time; we don't write the same :) So however you would like to write is the way you write. I just thought I'd give my input. Keep writing :)